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Is it wrong
To miss those calls at night
That went on for hours on end?
To miss staying up until 1 AM
Not wanting to end our conversation?
To miss reminiscing over past memories together
Of the great times we had?
To miss feeling that I could trust you
With absolutely any secret of who I am?
To miss hurting whenever you were in pain
As if attached by our emotions?

Is it wrong
To yearn for those fights between us
About which of us loved the other more?
To yearn for those dates that were always filled with joy,
Laughter, wanting time to freeze at that moment?
To yearn for the way that, in each of our conversations,
The words "I love you" would easily slip in?
To yearn for that feeling we had together
That we could conquer any feat thrown at us?
To yearn for the way you came to me for comfort
To help you through those tough times?

Is it wrong
To wish for the good times of innocence
We had before love interfered?
To wish for those talks that made me feel important,
And that really convinced me you really where the one?
To wish for the way people envied us,
Of the way we fell head-over-heels for one another?
To wish for the way people told us we were the perfect couple,
And feeling as if we really were.
To wish for one last chance
To kiss you, and see if it would stir up any emotions we once had?

Is it wrong
To still love you?
I want to explain to my friends out there... this is about all of them!! Not one of my past ex's in particular. There are certain things from each relationship that I miss, that I can't seem to get out of my mind. For those of you who don't understand, I dated a... decent amount of guys so far, and this poem is just to voice that, in each one of them, I miss a part of our relationship, of our past, maybe even of the love we shared. Anyway, enough personal talk, hope you liked it!!
BTW, this picture was gorgeously drawn by :icon8sketch8: 8sketch8, and I thought it was absolutely BEAUTIFUL!! Here's a link to his art [link]
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darkprincess512 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012
You made me feel like I wrote this myself that's how much it connects. Fabulous job.
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MidnightSun121 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :D I'm glad you liked it
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Love-is-Loss Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
This...made me miss my ex soo bad. ;~; Good Work o_o
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MidnightSun121 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, I appreciate it :D
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Love-is-Loss Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
You're welcome. I know how ya feel. lol
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BLITZENTERPRISES Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012  Student Filmographer
I feel the same way about my ex... this poem speaks to me and I hope I can get him back. :(
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MidnightSun121 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I hope you do, too. I'm glad you could relate (kind of)
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BLITZENTERPRISES Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012  Student Filmographer
Trust me, I relate to it dearly.
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zetsubou-kiira Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012
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JamiexShock13 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012
I can relate to this so much... i hate having emotions =( but anyways very fantastic poem!
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MidnightSun121 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Haha thank you! :D So do I... glad you can relate!
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DaisyLover87 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012
No, it's not wrong. It's called emotions and the grieving process. It's ok to feel all this, and remember.
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MidnightSun121 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :D I appreciate it
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DaisyLover87 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012
No problem. Anytime. :-)
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HopeRobin Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012  Student General Artist
...Did you subconsciously hijack my memories to write this? Because I can relate to every single word! Beautifully written! Well done. :) Lol, now I'm all nostalgic. :XD:
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MidnightSun121 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, thank you :D I'm glad you can relate
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soul-rose Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012
Beautiful words.
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MidnightSun121 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :D
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kellyclover Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012
u r such a wonderful writer!! It really hits home!! I wish i was as brave as u r to show ur work.. :) So wonderful !! Please keep writing!!
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MidnightSun121 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :D I really appreciate it. And it's not much of bravery, it's more like not caring what others think bout me =P I'm glad you could relate!
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kellyclover Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012
:) good way to think!!
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Purplez11 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012
thats cute
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MidnightSun121 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :D
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