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You sit there,
Crying a waterfall of tears,
Soaking the pillow under your head,
Wishing for the pain to end…

The world seems as if it's crashing down on you,
All your focus is on making the regret, the heartbreak, the betrayal,
Leave your soul through your tears…
I've been there.

Your heart feels abused and torn,
Ripped out of your body,
Leaving you gasping for breath,
Because he once was your life line, your reason to live.

Your love was toyed with by the boy you thought you knew,
Who you thought was the one,
Yet your heart was broken into pieces in the blink of an eye…
I've been there.

His face is all you see when you close your eyes,
Every thought leads back to him,
He never leaves your mind,
As if taunting you into insanity because you know he is no longer yours.

He was your other half,
Your protector sent from above,
Or so you thought…
I've been there.

I've been through all of this,
I know heartbreak is like a walk through Hell,
The pain makes you feel anguished,
As if the world is crumbling right beneath your feet.

Yet,
Through all this,
You must remember,
There is hope.

Because,
Believe it or not,
Your prince charming,
Or your damsel in distress,
Is walking the earth right this minute.
He is searching for you,
Wanting to protect you from any danger,
Be there for you through any dilemma,
To give you a shoulder to cry on…

Trust me,
I've been there.
Okay, confession... I've never had my heart broken. But I've broken plenty of hearts, unfortunately... Anyways, hope you enjoy.

EDIT (PLZ READ) I have been getting alot of comments about how I shouldn't be writing about this if i haven't gone through a break up.. well technically that's no true. I wrote this to one of those people:
I know it sounds weird, but I kind of broke up with them to wait and get some time to clear my head (I had alot going on at the time) and they always went away and found another girl.. So, in a way, it was a heart break. It kind of went both ways.
He broke my heart, but I kind of instigated it... Hope you all don't get insulted! I don't mean to
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deidei5745 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank-you for writing this my girlfriend just dumped me and this kinda helped..
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GeekTransformed Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank You.
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CrimsonShards Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I love this! 
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Moonshine3991 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Well... You captured the feeling very, very well I must say.
I've been feeling like this for too much time, actually... I wish there was a handbook for heartbreak =P It comes and goes now, really. It really gets better, people were right about that.

Great poem, congrats :tighthug:
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MidnightSun121 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
thank you very much, I agree it's difficult at times, but some people don't really notice how it won't always be that way.
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Moonshine3991 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Indeed. And I understand, I mean.. sometimes it really is difficult to grasp the thought that the pain won't actually last forever
I took my time and that time took its toll.
Hard as it is, people should understand that usually we are the only ones who can make things better. If we could realize that sooner, everything would be much easier =)
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ca-ru-te-ru Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013
Thank you
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sparksfly04 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I understand you 100% clearly I have recently been going thru a break up but your poem makes me understand that he wasn't the only boy in the world
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MidnightSun121 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm so glad it helps you, you'll find an even better guy don't worry
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idancewithangels735 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I just had mine broken but this makes me feel better.
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MidnightSun121 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Good, I'm glad :D
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idancewithangels735 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yup im happy you made this.
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URawrMyWorld Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013
ah.. This was beautiful, I cried :saddummy: good job :'o
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lulitoni04 Featured By Owner May 2, 2013
wow!! great job!! ... so beautiful! GOD! you make me cry, was very exciting
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MidnightSun121 Featured By Owner May 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh thank you! I'm glad you liked it :D
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DarianTheAlchemist Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
im going through a heart break right now so this really spoke to me
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ShadowingDarkness Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2013  Student Filmographer
This makes me feel a little teary reading it because it's what I'm feeling right now.

Funny enough, the only things I can say when anyone asks me how I am is either 'Meh' or 'Could be better but could be worse' but this sums it up perfectly for me right now.

Eventhough it hurts to see and understand it, thank you for putting the feeling of heartbreak down so perfectly.
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MidnightSun121 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Of course, I hope you start to feel better, and know you're not alone.
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ShadowingDarkness Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013  Student Filmographer
Thank youu <3
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You really have the feelings down for someone who has never had a heartbreak. </3
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MidnightSun121 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I've seen so many others go through it, unfortunately
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acemonify Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013
How to break up with someone You: "Your ex is attractive." Partner: "Which one?" You: "Me. BYE." :) classic!
your poem almost made me cry cuz it reminds me of myself. I need a hug :(
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Drewness360 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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magacha Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
soo emotive :') thnx for sharing thins :D
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MidnightSun121 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, im glad you like it :D
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lillymagic Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2012  Student Digital Artist
this makes me cry even thought am too youg to be in love
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MidnightSun121 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm a really young age too, but I don't think think anyone is too young to be in love :D
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lillymagic Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012  Student Digital Artist
well yeah buttt..THERES NO ONE I LIKE..sorry if u think if i was yelling bt i wasnt
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ratchetthecutest Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012
wonderful writing
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MidnightSun121 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :D
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lilwhitewolfluna Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wow....
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luvserenity000 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2012  Student Writer
its awsome
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MidnightSun121 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :D I'm glad you liked it
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luvserenity000 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2012  Student Writer
your welcome
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uoah Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2012
ohhh i <3 it soo much
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MidnightSun121 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :D I'm glad you enjoyed it
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NINJA-BEAST Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
THIS POEM IS.........EPIC hehe get like as in epic poetry as in aswesum and uk like a....OH UK WUT I MEAN LOL !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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MidnightSun121 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
lol thanks! :D I get what you mean... Appreciate it
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NINJA-BEAST Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yeah hehe ...i crack myself up....hhhh whoooo ...heh....hehehehe
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missymel6 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is a really good poem. :D
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MidnightSun121 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it :happybounce:
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missymel6 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
No, i don't like it. I LOVE IT! :D
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MidnightSun121 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
lol thanks! :iconproudplz:
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missymel6 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Your welcome. :D
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DunTrebleMaster Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
I really like the picture
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lilfixit Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
No one should get insulted at an artist trying to portray an emotion they haven't experienced yet. I do not believe Rowling has ever performed magic with a wand and maybe she's never kissed a girl either, but she wrote about it. Tolkein probably never killed anyone or commanded an army, but he wrote about it. So...if people are being a nuisance tell them to get over themselves.

This is okay but I'm not really getting much depth out of it. I think maybe if you had experienced it you might notice that your poem comes off as slightly shallow. But a lot of that's my opinion, I just like some specifics thrown in there instead of a broad generalization of every break up...I feel like that's easier to do if you've actually experienced it yourself but if you haven't and can still write about it, you know you've got some talent.
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MidnightSun121 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, you're right, I wish I had experienced it, because going through experiences is really how I write poems. But, this was a one time thing, and I appreciate you standing up for my poem... Thanks :D
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lilfixit Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
I wouldn't wish it for you since it does suck, but experiences are pretty helpful for writing, as you already know. :) I try to support practice as often as possible. If you don't practice writing things that haven't actually happened to you then there's not much room to improve in that area.

You're welcome. :)
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Nikko-chin Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
not a broken heart, just a crack pairing
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Reawee Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That's a really nice poem, writed with feeling and full with emotions. (:
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