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You sit there,
Crying a waterfall of tears,
Soaking the pillow under your head,
Wishing for the pain to end…

The world seems as if it's crashing down on you,
All your focus is on making the regret, the heartbreak, the betrayal,
Leave your soul through your tears…
I've been there.

Your heart feels abused and torn,
Ripped out of your body,
Leaving you gasping for breath,
Because he once was your life line, your reason to live.

Your love was toyed with by the boy you thought you knew,
Who you thought was the one,
Yet your heart was broken into pieces in the blink of an eye…
I've been there.

His face is all you see when you close your eyes,
Every thought leads back to him,
He never leaves your mind,
As if taunting you into insanity because you know he is no longer yours.

He was your other half,
Your protector sent from above,
Or so you thought…
I've been there.

I've been through all of this,
I know heartbreak is like a walk through Hell,
The pain makes you feel anguished,
As if the world is crumbling right beneath your feet.

Yet,
Through all this,
You must remember,
There is hope.

Because,
Believe it or not,
Your prince charming,
Or your damsel in distress,
Is walking the earth right this minute.
He is searching for you,
Wanting to protect you from any danger,
Be there for you through any dilemma,
To give you a shoulder to cry on…

Trust me,
I've been there.
Okay, confession... I've never had my heart broken. But I've broken plenty of hearts, unfortunately... Anyways, hope you enjoy.

EDIT (PLZ READ) I have been getting alot of comments about how I shouldn't be writing about this if i haven't gone through a break up.. well technically that's no true. I wrote this to one of those people:
I know it sounds weird, but I kind of broke up with them to wait and get some time to clear my head (I had alot going on at the time) and they always went away and found another girl.. So, in a way, it was a heart break. It kind of went both ways.
He broke my heart, but I kind of instigated it... Hope you all don't get insulted! I don't mean to
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CrimsonShards Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014
I love this! 
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Moonshine3991 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Well... You captured the feeling very, very well I must say.
I've been feeling like this for too much time, actually... I wish there was a handbook for heartbreak =P It comes and goes now, really. It really gets better, people were right about that.

Great poem, congrats :tighthug:
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MidnightSun121 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
thank you very much, I agree it's difficult at times, but some people don't really notice how it won't always be that way.
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Moonshine3991 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Indeed. And I understand, I mean.. sometimes it really is difficult to grasp the thought that the pain won't actually last forever
I took my time and that time took its toll.
Hard as it is, people should understand that usually we are the only ones who can make things better. If we could realize that sooner, everything would be much easier =)
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ca-ru-te-ru Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013
Thank you
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sparksfly04 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I understand you 100% clearly I have recently been going thru a break up but your poem makes me understand that he wasn't the only boy in the world
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MidnightSun121 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm so glad it helps you, you'll find an even better guy don't worry
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idancewithangels735 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I just had mine broken but this makes me feel better.
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MidnightSun121 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Good, I'm glad :D
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idancewithangels735 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yup im happy you made this.
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