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Do you remember, love?
How you would tempt me,
So expertly, so slyly,
Blinding me with desperation,
Or was it loneliness?
Oh, how naive I was,
How young and gullible,
Yet you twisted me and toyed with me,
As if I was your puppet on a string.

Do you remember, love?
How I fell for it,
I fell for your promises of happiness,
And your lies about my "happy ever after" with my prince.
It was pure bliss,
I was flying above the clouds with love,
Yet the love was so short lived.

Do you remember, love?
When your devious plot truly succeeded,
How you kicked me to the curb
With nothing but a chipped heart
And a flickering soul....

Do you know of the countless nights of tears,
Of the days full of guilt, regret, reminescense,
The times I walked around in search of who I used to be,
Without you by my side?
But, of course you know,
You sat there, observing me, so intently,
Laughing at my pain, my confusion.

But,
Do you remember, love?
More importantly than anything else?
I survived,
Through the tortuous days of pain you threw my way,
I made it,
And am proud to say that I was not a piece of your little game.

Do you remember, love?
Because I sure do.
I wrote this, as if it was TO love itself, not a past guy that I've liked. If that makes sense =P I'm just tired of love, and the pain it brings. Hope you like!
BTW, not my picture.
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DaisyLover87 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2012
*sigh* yes, the whispers of love, the half-truths within it sometimes...the love that you thought was yours...

Love isn't always like this. There is a good side, too, but I do understand the side you have described...
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MidnightSun121 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, I haven't gotten the privledge to meet that good side yet. Hope it'll happen soon though :D
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:icondaisylover87:
DaisyLover87 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2012
It's unfortunately rare, but it's out there. Right around the corner. You never know when it's gonna pop up. Keep hanging on.
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MidnightSun121 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :D I really appreciate it. It's just what I needed to hear today.
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:icondaisylover87:
DaisyLover87 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2012
You're welcome. I'm happy I was able to encourage you. :-)
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:icondevacious:
Devacious Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You can't use photos that aren't yours. It's against dA rules.
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katief8 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
look, she's done nothing wrong. she told everyone that it's not her picture. she's not claiming it as her own. she's not hurting anyone. ever heard of the saying 'if you dont have anything nice to say, dont say anything at all?' well, you're not being nice, so dont say anything. ~MidnightSun121 posted this so that people could read this, enjoy it, and even find comfort in it. so, please, stop bashing her poem for pointless reasons. i dont know if it's because you're jealous or taking out some other anger on her, but NO ONE appreciates it. so just stop. you're clearly upsetting her, so just leave her alone.
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MidnightSun121 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I disclaimed it, therefore I am not claiming it as my own picture. I don't see how there is anything wrong with that. Thousands of other people do just the same.
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Devacious Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Giving credit is not the same as asking permission.

Also, just because other people did it, doesn't mean it's right..

It's about etiquette too.
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MidnightSun121 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
So, you're saying that I should track down the person who took this picture, and ask their permission? Seems a bit far fetched to me.
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