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Days pass on like years
Without you by my side,
Life feels so dull
Without your mesmerizing eyes and goofy smile,
My heart pains with aching
Without the never- ending joy I have when I see you...

Missing you,
Missing your jokes,
The way you look at me with those eyes,
The way you talk to me,
The way you tell me how important I am to you,
The way you tell me that you love me...

It all points to being love struck,
But I'm scared to trust you,
To love you back,
To be open with you in a way I never have with anyone before....

You promise that you'll  never leave me,
You promise that you'll love me forever,
You promise that you'll help me through anything,
But you know,
And I know,
That you have a tendency of breaking your promises...
I wrote this when I was away from my crush, and I missed him... Some people thought it was about being away from an ex. I guess it could be taken either way. Anyway, the picture is not mine, here is the link to it: [link]
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jazewel Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Student General Artist
This has to be my favorite of all your poems, really touching.
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MidnightSun121 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you :D
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DaisyLover87 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012
:-) Good editing. The new title and the addition of the picture work well. Good job!
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MidnightSun121 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Haha thanks to you for the title :D
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DaisyLover87 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012
:-P I merely suggested it. You are the one who decided to use it. *heehee*
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MidnightSun121 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Haha well thank you anyway :w00t:
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DaisyLover87 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012
*smiles* You are very welcome. Anytime.
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sami121candy Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
great job once agian
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MidnightSun121 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :D
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sami121candy Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
np
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SkullsAndStripes Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2012
I can relate.... nice poem
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MidnightSun121 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :D
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Tobiasvkurjata Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012
This poem has alot of feeling I can relate to...
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Bala-psychotic Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is EXACTLY what Im going through at the moment for YEARS...The poem is so Heartbreaking that it brought tears to my eyes...it is a lovely poem,though and very well written~ :heart:
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MidnightSun121 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Aw thank you, I'm glad you liked it so much :D
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Bala-psychotic Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:heart:
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summerday27 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Im going through this right now, sorta. I'm head over heals for a crush. I live for the days i get to see him.

Beautiful poem, by the way <3
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MidnightSun121 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :D And I'm glad I'm not the only one, it feels so strange being away from him.
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summerday27 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome. Yeah, I know what you mean :D
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Sammi-Spades Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is beautiful... too beautiful for my word to describe.
But may I say this: I cried because of its beauty
Thank you for sharing this with us all.
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MidnightSun121 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Awww, thank you! :D I'm glad it touched you so much
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photogirl25 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
do u want to submit this to my contest
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MidnightSun121 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hmm, idk, i think im gonna submit the other one. I'll get back to you on it over the weekend
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katief8 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
aww! coot! and sad...
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MidnightSun121 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Haha tanks! :D
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katief8 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
No probs mah friend. Btw I'm really bored so u should text me XD
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MidnightSun121 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
lol nah, i dont know if i wanna... =P
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katief8 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:'O you made me gasp-cry
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MidnightSun121 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
lol js!!!!
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katief8 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
=P
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